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Witty Little Knitter

I read fantasy, crime, true crime, lgbt-romance and books written by my favourite comedians. List not necessarily complete.
Sometimes I write for Bibliodaze

Currently reading

Stephen and Matilda
Jim Bradbury
Progress: 52/262 pages
Krieg und Frieden
Michael Grusemann, Leo Tolstoy
Progress: 579/1024 pages

Reading progress update: I've read 65%.

Mrs. Kaplan and the Matzoh Ball of Death - Mark Reutlinger

Just a hint: if the only thing you can think of to keep you readers engaged is too keep the information the characters already have from them and not even have a flimsy excuse for why they are doing it:

 

 

Don't. Ever. Go back to square one. Rewrite.