Can I have a book just about Holli please? She's so cool.
Also: I have a pet-peeve with romance/erotica...I get slightly annoyed when all we get to read about is either the couple being together or apart but thinking about each other/talking to somebody about the relationship.
I know it's romance and I'm not expecting half a book about the heroine doing something unconnected to the main plot...but so far we have Sophie and Neil having sex, Sophie and Neil talking about sex, Sophie thinking about Neil, Sophie talking to Holli about Neil (and Sophie and Neil having more sex...) The week Neil was away just got time-skipped over. I wouldn't have minded a few paragraphs about Sophies everyday work.